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So...

You stuck a bunch of sound clips together, from music you did not make yourself, and attached them to play/stop movie clips, which you may or may not have created and programmed yourself, with barely visible animations in the background, which you may or may not have created, in a Flash that ends up being...seven megs large? And did you perchance happen to optimize the sound in this?

Next time you submit something, kindly demonstrate your own mastery of the tools available to you. If you like music, try making music and submitting it to the Audio Portal. But a simple playlist is something you can put on your MySpace. I'd like to see something a little more creative.

GMarixX responds:

sorry!! too bad for you!!

Decent

Here's my unnecessarily tough review:

Art: beginner-level, but not bad.
Animation: minimal, but not to the point of boredom.
Sound: there was at least music.
Storyline: it was okay. For the future, storyboards make longer plots easier to manage.

Overall, okay for a beginner. I think you'll improve as you move forward and gain experience. Keep working on it!

manjunath responds:

Thank you so much for your valuable time to critic this movie and give me some useful pointers. God bless you kind sir :-)

Nice gesture

But...I have to be a jerk now and review it.

Art: not horrible, but could be improved quite a bit.
Animation: minimal. Again, work on it.
Sound: none. Believe me, this adds a lot to any movie.
Organization: it was okay.
The cursor: Kind of annoying, actually, even though it fit the theme.

Say hi to your mom for us, and keep working on your animation skills.

TheUndeadNinja responds:

I will work on my animation, i want to be really good one day.

Work on it

Your drawings of the Enterprise weren't bad, but they could use some work. As I-Rule said, work on tweening; it'll make life easier. Plus you may want to study the movements in the original version more closely; the days of motion control in the 1960's actually aren't too different from tweening now.

A decent likeness, but overall it leaves room for improvement.

Trekkie2063 responds:

True. I admit, this isn't great, but given I had a deadline of when the assignment was due, I don't think it's half bad. And like I say, I wanted to go back and improve stuff, but I forgot a great deal of flash lol

Question answered

My first encounter with I.V. was Mastermind: WC. I knew she had to come from somewhere... In any case, not too bad. I wouldn't mind seeing you develop this further, perhaps with a little cleanup in the drawing and more backstory.

I also demand a sequel!

This was a great job for a senior project. (Sure beats the crap out of mine.) Animations was good, chracters were great, and the story (what there was of it) was funny. I'd like to see more of Stan and Eyeballus, and perhaps with better audio if possible.

Badger Badger all over again

Animation was minimal, but still grabbed your attention; effects definitely added a lot to the feel of the movie. The song itself was hilarious, and the video fit with it perfectly. Had a similar mental effect to "Badger, Badger." Very well done; I give it a 10 and a 5.

(And now I have to watch it again, damn you! :P)

Not bad

Wouldn't mind participating in the sequel. A few qualms, though:

1) Video is too small.
2) Too short overall.
3) Would have liked a greater variety of NG talent.

Well done for a collab, though. Hope to catch the next one before it runs out of slots.

P.S.: Terkoiz...where did those barrels come from, exactly?

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