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No better

The only improvement from last time is the still-ridiculously-long intro video went back to the splash frame at the end. If you're going to submit something to the Portal, kindly make it something worth our time...and not so much time, spent watching one thing going by really slowly. It bores us half to death.

Weird, but good

Generally speaking I don't like stick figure Flashes, but this one displayed some amount of quality. The mouth movements were synced very well, which I'm sure is difficult (I've never really tried it). So, 6/10, and maybe characters with a little more flesh in your next one.

Axeraider67 responds:

i like stick figures, sometimes they add funny where flesh and bones just cant.

Looks entertaining

I'd much rather see the full product though. Seems a fitting addition to the Madness collection.

It didn't go anywhere

<a>http://www.newgrounds.com/download s/preloaders/<a>

Just grab a preloader and stick it in the first frame. You don't have to do anything else.

Even as spam, it fails

1) You couldn't spell hentai.
2) Hentai generally has an adult rating. This was given an "Anyone."

If you're going to spam the portal, do us all a favor and keep making it this obvious.

It was alright

Not a fan of Phoenix Wright or of Numa Numa, but you did okay. A little bit out of sync, though.

PS: How DO you sync mouth movements with audio files in Flash? It's something I want to be able to do in future projects.

Needs work

-Audio was too quiet; find a way to fix it.
-Mouth animations were out of sync; sort of followed the "blah-blah-blah" pattern, which frankly is a bit annoying. Try to match the mouth movements to the voices.
-Plot was lacking. Try a storyboard next time so you can put a little more into it.

Good try, but it leaves me wanting.

Not here, thank you

It wasn't bad, necessarily...not great, either...but it doesn't really belong on Newgrounds. Generally the Flash portal is for stuff you make in Flash. And you can do a lot more with that than with Paint and Movie Maker. Try it sometime; I know there's a trial version of Flash lying around Newgrounds...somewhere...(stupid me)

MeNChaseProductions responds:

Now THIS is the kind of reviews I'm looking for. Thanks. I will remove this in about a week; I'm just looking for thoughts of others. My professionalism with paint and movie maker is improving, and all of the animations are on Youtube as the description says. I've thought about getting Flash, but I kind of felt as if I needed to stay true to the roots, ya know? (also I'm a bit strapped for cash). For now, I guess I'll stick to waiting for Youtube to recognize MeNChaseProductions...

I've come to a decision.

From hereonin, I'm going to stop reviewing spam, and just do my part to keep the portal clean. S'long, Mr. Noise.

Expand on the vocals

It was simple, it was funny. But all the characters kind of started to sound the same. I like Zero's mellow demeanor, but everyone else needed more feeling to their voice, particularly regarding the shouting moments. Fix that, and you'll have something great.

ThePatstar responds:

yeah, this is basically my first attempt at voice acting. I'll keep practicing, though. Thanks for the feedback

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