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For a random movie, it was good

More a matter of lack of resources and experience than anything else. Focus on the art portion, maybe try a storyline sometime. Good audio has requirements beyond most people's ability. Good start; keep working at it.

Kurai-Samurai responds:

I can draw good manga but i cant animate it.

Okay then

Just about anyone on Newgrounds could make that. Not impressed.

jmerk800 responds:

At least I contribute to Newgrounds and don't just go insulting other peoples stuff.

Uh, no.

Zero point, little skill required. Gave you a point for having the decency to add an epilepsy warning.

KaosKilla9231 responds:

Um...Thanks I Guess

Nice job

Pretty good for a start. A little experience in ActionScript and tweening tools might help you; also, try a bit more effort with the visuals. But a good experiment overall.

TonyAzemia responds:

Ive already learnt how to tween but i just dont use it that much though and actionscripting is sometimes (but not always) confusing.
lol thanks

This is the meaning of art

I only reduce your score because you have room for improvement in quality. The story was beautiful, and by that alone this short has earned its right to stay here.

Amazing job in all respects

Loved the graphics, loved the animation, loved the sounds, and the storyline (what there was of one, anyway). I'd like to see a lot more done with this, to see it more developed. Run with it.

Rating on storyline

The only advice I can give is learn to animate. Pin that down, and you might have something.

For the animation

Kudos to you for taking the time to draw the animation by hand, frame by frame. (It's a pain in the neck.) Only reason I shorted you a point is that I'd like to see more. Good job, though!

For what it was, pretty good

A little long-winded at certain points, but funny overall. Keep working on storyline, practice the art skills...you'll go places.

Worth keeping

...because it shows people what NOT to do. I give this a "3" for that reason only.

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