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Good, but anticlimatic

Funny as Foamy always is, it seemed this episode lacked something. Although I was glad to hear about the shocky monkeys again. A nice perspective on the global recession too, if I may say so.

Not the best episode ever, but we still love Foamy. Keep 'em comin'!

Something familiar...

I enjoyed this little parody. It was funny, the style fit the subject, and it has potential as a series.

Two of the characters' voices sounded awfully familiar...Legend and Dom, if I'm not mistaken?

Epic. Enough said.

Congratulations to Euphoric on their Tankie nomination! There's plenty of competition, and all well qualified. But as I see it, there's a 99% certainty that this year's winner for "Movie of the Year" is Fallen Angel, hands down. You put an incredible amount of work into this, and it deserves to win. BREAK A LEG!

You guys didn't disappoint

This collab was everything I expected and better. Sorry I didn't get to contribute, but you guys definitely pulled it off. I wholly expect this to place in the Winter Flash-Off.

What's missing

-Sound effects. Look around the Web for free sounds.
-Preloader, obtained here: http://www.newgrounds.com/downloads/p reloaders/
-A stop function. Just add "stop();" (without quotes) to Actions in the last frame, and be sure to put a "The End" in there.
-It's kind of small.

Not a bad start--in fact, it was entertaining--but it does need work.

TripleDK responds:

Haha, I kind of knew that, but thanks anyway :P
I also tried with a preloader and a stop thingy. But since it's really short, it felt weird with a preloader so... A new one is already in the making, which WILL include:
SFX, PRELOADERS!!!, REPLAY BUTTON!!!, and most important, it will be much longer :D

Not bad at all

It was well-drawn, well-animated, and it was kind of funny. (And I didn't know dA had its own preloader. :P ) Good start; I think you have what it takes to be popular here.

We may have our winner!

This was flawless artwork, true to the Christmas spirit. If this doesn't place at the end of the Winter Flash-Off, I will be VERY surprised. Well done, and good luck!

Not bad...

But just for the record, "The Day the Earth Stood Still" is not a new movie. It's a remake of a 1950's sci-fi classic. Watch that one; it's still good.

UberCream responds:

Yeah, but the remake is still a new movie, it's just not original.

Good humor

"Thinking can be fun once you get the hang of it." I think this is my new slogan.

Plotline: Good. Not a whole lot more you could have done with it. If you haven't done this already, storyboarding helps a lot with longer stories.
Art/Animation: Average. Look up some tutorials on character building; it'll help a lot.
Sound: is there. A little background noise from the TV channels would have added a good amount to this.

Overall, not bad for a first submission. Keep at it.

Mediocre

I understand it's your second Flash, but I measure everyone by the same yardstick. If we cut you slack, what would be your motivation to imrpove? :)

In any case, this was rather short, with amateur graphics and not much animation, though I will give you credit for lip synching. The ending itself was a bit disappointing, and not because it was an IOU; you need more of a buildup to make the ending funny. As for the bad mic, you might try taking your recording and adjusting it with a sound mixer; ask around to see if there's any useful techniques.

It wasn't horrible, but it left me wanting. Keep trying.

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