A much needed message
While being overweight is a complication in and of itself, the culture surrounding "fat versus thin" needs to die. Not just go away somewhere, but DIE. First you get your stomach stapled, then you start getting Botox treatments, and next it's a nosejob, and it just goes on. And you will never be good enough; someone somewhere will always find something wrong with you.
As for celebrities, how could you forget Kirstie Alley? Her Jenny Craig campaign lasted a whole year. After losing 45 pounds out of her 75-pound goal, she looked like her normal self again - then at 75 pounds she bleached her hair, and even the little black dress couldn't slim her down after that. Just goes to show you, kids: even losing that weight won't make you society's idea of perfection!
And for constructive criticism, the style's the same, it's never going to change, yadda yadda...but quality is not the point of Neurotically Yours. The point is to send an important message to society in a way that will make people laugh their heads off at themselves for being so stupid, and you pulled that off quite effectively. Kudos.