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Art: not at all bad for an early piece. Backgrounds could use a little more color.
Animation: Props for going with frame-by-frame, but it lacked fluidity. Work on it.
Style: I don't really see one yet. It's developing.
Story: A little cliche, but it was entertaining nonetheless.
Sound: Muffled, but clear. Voice acting was decent.

Overall: 3 out of 5. I had to dock half a point for the lack of a preloader at the beginning and a stop function at the end. But you've definitely got a good thing going here, and I look forward to seeing more.

I wasn't really feeling it either. The biggest problem with this one: too much to read. All those words flying around killed the ambience. Then there was the zodiac Pokemon (or whatever they were), which felt really out of place with the overall TF2 theme. And you really should have taken the time to draw the briefcase in three dimensions, or else not had it spinning.

But otherwise I saw a definite improvement over Revengineering. You made great use of layers and gradients, really making everything pop instead of just flat black everywhere. And the story wasn't too shabby either. You're on your way to some great work...you're just not quite there yet.

Art: Simple, clean, good use of color contrast.
Animation: For the most part, very smooth; no jarring transitions.
Style: A familiar formula, not original on its own, but rarely done with square heads.
Story: Short clips prevent overly long gags. There were no jokes I didn't get.
Sound: Crisp, clean, didn't blow out my eardrums.

Overall: 4/5.

Haven't done one of these in a while...

Art: Simple, creative, easy on the eyes.
Animation: Very clean, very smooth. Visually interesting.
Style: Consistent with excellent use of color.
Story: A bit cliche, but well executed.
Sound: Clear, appropriate volume, overall good.

Total: 4.5/5. Nicely done.

Grossly inaccurate

Everyone knows that Mercury was Jupiter's bitch. Get your facts straight.

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Okay, parody reply over.

Art: not bad.
Animation: Also well done.
Style: Entirely inconsistent, although I guess that was kind of the point.
Story: There wasn't supposed to be one, so skip that.
Sound: Good quality, but too much overlap with the voices.

So as much as I personally didn't care for this, my honest overall rating is: 8/10.

Fantastic!

Another Weebl music video that I can't get enough of. (The blatant stereotypes are what make it so much fun.) Animation was splendid, and I kindly request an extended cut of the song be uploaded to the Newgrounds Audio Portal. Thank you.

Delightful as always

Seriously, why aren't you getting paid yet? You should be pitching Monkeywrench to a studio in Hollywood or something.

Animation was smooth art was original, sound was synchronized - and it was funny. I saw nothing wrong with this. Good job as always.

(Recommendation to other viewers: watch in medium quality.)

Yeah, so...

...I just let the thing run in the background the third time around and played a bunch of Minesweeper while it was going. Here's the useful part of the review:

Art: excellent, as I expect from the artists involved. Nice job on the sky.
Animation: minimal, not really a big deal.
Style: Each artist had their own unique take. Props.
Story: 25 minutes of nothing in particular. (On a side note, it was offensive.)
Sound: decent.

Overall: 6/10.

And that's all I have to say.

What else was I supposed to rate this?

Art: Immaculate detail for a Flash animation. Then again that's what I've come to expect from you.
Animation: very smooth, very fluid. A little stop-and-go at times, but not so much it was distracting.
Style: screams Josh Palmer.
Story: very well done. I'm not sure who has more issues, the bear or the kid.
Sound: balanced, appropriate volume, well choreographed.

Overall: 10/10, 5/5, a new favorite. Best of luck in the final round!

Nice work

Art: Simple, but not too simple. Could have been more detailed, but didn't need to be.
Animation: Very fluid, and nearly all frame by frame. Very impressive.
Style: dynamic, intriguing, interesting - what I would expect from a good animation.
Story: "Yeah, we just decided we'd go fight the war with the robots...you know, on a whim." Kind of sounds like my friends.
Sound: A little too quiet for my liking; then again, my headphones are giving out. Interesting choice of music; kept everything lighthearted in spite of the subject matter.

Overall: enjoyed it. 9/10, 5 stars.

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