Dawnslayer's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[NGAP Radio]

One thing missing

Would it be possible to include a category selector? Y'know, there's just certain days I don't mind listening to bluegrass and other days I mind it a lot...just a suggestion. Very nice gizmo.

[Ultimate HTML Tutorial]

Sub-par

The text was unreadable, the music player was broken, and it was obvious you cut-pasted from other tutorial sites (which is essentially plagiarism). Furthermore, there was nothing in this Flash I couldn't have taught myself over the Internet. Try again.

[jason dressup]

Before you go any further

You got the programming down, if not necessarily the graphics. But before you put a motherload of effort into this, let me tell you what makes a great dress-up game: not having to click and drag a gazillion articles of clothing to get at the ONE you want, just to find the graphic leaves a sliver of skin exposed no matter where you put it.

The GOOD dressup games are very well organized: you press a button, and an article of clothing appears from hidden space exactly where it's supposed to go. I recommend learning how to make one of those before pursuing this any further.

[Crash Car]

Needs improvement

It's kind of hard to look at with the way the lines scroll past. Please take time to translate the instructions into English; even a poor translation is still helpful. Not bad overall - it just needs more.

[Tank Search]

No pause function; fix the music player

Add a pause function that hides the picture while you go do your business. And whatever's wrong with the music player, please fix it. Other than that, not a bad game.

[< Enigma >]

Splendid

Okay. I finished every puzzle. I beat every other challenge. I completed "Alien 2" in three clicks out of the required fourteen.

Now where is that damn happy face?

Seriously though, a great game. Fun, challenging, addictive. 10/10.

[OrangeRunner2 EngineDemo]

Needs work

One thing I liked about the original OR, is you could see what you were doing (even if the saws were a little unpredictable). With this as it is now, I have trouble telling which way is up. If I were a little closer in, the game would be much better.

I do like the idea that you now fight against the black guys. Relfex Mode is plus as well. But for lack of obstacles and power cells, a part of OR just seems to be missing.

One more thing - "How to play" doesn't work.

Other than these things, I do like the direction you're taking. And the running animation is much improved. Keep working at it.

[Bubble Adventure]

Enjoyed it a lot

Good twist on the platformer. Sadly I can't find my way past level 2 (where's the star?), but it was definitely an interesting concept. 8/10.

51lver responds:

level two star is on the far far top right hand corner of the game

[Dexterity]

Argh

I'm sure there are gamemasters out there who can steer a little ball around with arrow keys for hours on end. I'm not one of them. I suggest re-thinking the controls a bit, and adding a life bar.

[Madness Regent]

Two words: PAUSE, KEY.

It's a great game, but hard to understand without knowing all the controls. An instructions page would be helpful. And there is a real world out there that calls to us on occassion,so a pause function would be really nice. Other than that, a perfect game. 8/10.