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I don't often log in anymore, but I felt compelled to add my two cents here.

As a fellow autistic, I totally feel what's behind the message; I especially love the chorus - perfect blend of music and lyrics. The first and second verses are fine lyrically, but in terms of melody and instruments I feel like I'm listening to a different song than the one I hear in the chorus. I'm not saying the different mood is wrong; it just feels too harsh and "plucky," if that gets my meaning across.

The rhythm of the bridge threw me off too; the general melody was fine, but I think it would have sounded better without the pauses in the odd-numbered lines. A short instrumental before the bridge, alike to the chorus in sound, wouldn't do any harm; and perhaps the final line could trail a bit longer to lead the song into its conclusion.

That aside, the only thing left to talk about would be the mastering, and I have no business critiquing that. In the meantime I've downloaded the track to my playlist, and if you do any further work on it I'd love to take a listen to the final product.

Jacob responds:

The verse-to-chorus contrast was intentional, to personify the difference in emotion. Sensory overload and anxiety in the verse, introspection in the chorus.
That said, I can totally see how the contrast may have been poorly executed, and I appreciate the input there.

Your enjoyment of the chorus also helps me figure out which direction to continue in, musically. That sort of sound actually comes most naturally to me, but I figured it was less interesting to listen to.
Looks like I had it backwards! I'll definitely be writing more music with that sound. :)

Thank you so much for the detailed review! It means a lot, especially from a mutually autistic user.

It's good, but I wouldn't classify it as industrial. It sounds more like indie.

ChandlerThompson responds:

Yeah I had no idea what to classify it as, but indie definitely sounds like a better fit. Thanks for the review, dude!

At first I was all, "cool, but I'm not sure it really brings anything new" ...and then you threw in the vocals. That just elevated the song to a whole new level. Well done.

DanJohansen responds:

Glad you dug it man! ROCK ON!

Might not be dubstep, but with some tweaking this could make a fantastic industrial/EBM track. It has that kind of melody and rhythm to it...I'll download what you've got now, but I really think you should put some more work into this. There's a lot of potential here that hasn't been realized yet.

Simplymusic responds:

The feedback here is kind of vague. What in your opinion needs tweaking?

Very nicely done; reminds me a bit of Hevia. I'll have to keep watch for more of your work.

Emid responds:

Bundles of thanks for liking!
Just watched Hevia on youtube. Didn't know about it. I think as far as the traditional music is concerned, there might be similarities in music to the extent of monotonous-ness, as its like an anthem of a culture; a mindset of a nation. Anyways, thanks again :)

Good composition, well executed, but it did feel a little quiet at times. There was a part in middle where the guitar was drowned out; maybe you did that deliberately, I don't know. But overall I like it. Make more.

JacobusMusic responds:

I dont know exactly what you mean, but i think the drowning of guitars here.... it was deliberately (00:52). Anyway thanks for the comment and your opinionnn !!!

It's good, but I can't help but feel there's something missing. I don't know what that something is, but the whole time I was listening, the song felt hollow. Some low, subtle vocals in the background might help to fill it out. There were also points (especially around 04:15) where it sounded really grainy, and that kind of disrupted the sound for me.

But overall, I like it. A good balance of sounds, a nice melody, and definitely has that dark industrial vibe. I'll have to check out some of your other work.

ZLEAP responds:

I hate to admit that I use compression as a crutch. Slowly but surely, my technical skill is catching up with my imagination.

I'm toying around with live instruments and clear vocal samples these days. Expect a creative shift soon.

Amazing work, guys! I can actually recognize the distinctive style of each guitarist. Very well done.

Just one question: who was on drums?

RobSoundtrack responds:

Awesome!!! It is effectively one of my favorite things about the song too!
So many different tones
Thanks so much!

I did the drums (sequence)

I feel this song lacks a consistent theme. I was loving the parts with the guitar, but for the parts in between those it was like I was listening to a completely different song. It's not bad by any means, but I think it could have been better.

ArcaneSoul responds:

Eh yeah. Whenever i make my dark songs like this they tend to be less melodic.

Im still learning so cut me some slack XD

Anyone else picture robot armies marching through the streets of an American suburb?

Anyway, not bad, but the three segments all sound pretty much alike. There needs to be a more dynamic buildup as the song progresses.

TBM responds:

I'll admit it was a copy and paste job, but I was getting bored of it and wanted to rush it out...

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