Dawnslayer's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[poptarts revenge (PTR)]

It was fine

Get NG preloaders here:

http://www.newgrounds.com/downloads/

Make that the first frame of the movie. Then on the last frame, open the Actions panel and type:

stop();

to end it. That is all you need to know.

Oh, and the Flash itself was okay. A good start.

FlashManJR14 responds:

thankz for the info

[unfunny FUCK 22]

You can tell

It's obvious that the background is what's moving, while the "escalator" stands almost idle. Try adding a few tricks to the escalator to make it more convincing, like a shine effect that scrolls across the rails every few seconds.

Orangeb33f responds:

why

[Zackyboy2 Faggot.]

Absolute no

You made a video, not a Flash. Videos go on YouTube. And furthermore, his name is spelt "Urkel" - as in with a "U" - so you can't be that big of a fan.

Fautzo responds:

You'll never beleive how much I care.

[GE.NE.SIS.: Game Intro]

Amazing workmanship

Not only did you make this game look really entertaining, but the effort you put into the art is staggering. Anyone who uses Flash knows that scale of detail is very time-consuming. An excellent preview, and I look forward to seeing the final product!

fairypoet responds:

Thank you!
I'm glad you like it. Hopefully the game itself wont be an disappointment to you.

[Come Back Collab 2]

Loved it

Very well done to everyone who was a part of this. You did a fantastic job.

How do people usually get involved with this stuff, anyway?

Stone-Steven responds:

I got involved with flash the same way you have.. i watched some. Then I looked further into it and made my own site blah blah blah. To get into something like this you join a flash based forum such as www.fluidanims.com :]

[Marios People.]

Good except for one thing

I didn't get the mushroom joke. For those of us who've never played Mario Bros., you may want to try something a little more obvious next time.

eddythanoob responds:

YOU'VE NEVER PLAYED MARIO!? OMG.........but yeah i'll try something different next time, Thanks.

[Stickman Parkour]

Good for a beginning

You need to invest a lot of time in making this look "real." I would imagine parkour is harder to do with arms and legs that short. ( :-P ) Use the omnipotent powers of Flash to "build" characters rather than just draw them, and creat more believable environments. It takes time, effort, and a LOT of patience; but hey, it's still summer.

JamesHardy responds:

Im still working towards the stage of "building characters" as i have only just started doing animation And i do know its not good but hey isn't this the standard of an absolute beginner?

[Randomnesses]

For a random movie, it was good

More a matter of lack of resources and experience than anything else. Focus on the art portion, maybe try a storyline sometime. Good audio has requirements beyond most people's ability. Good start; keep working at it.

Kurai-Samurai responds:

I can draw good manga but i cant animate it.

[MK disco party]

Okay then

Just about anyone on Newgrounds could make that. Not impressed.

jmerk800 responds:

At least I contribute to Newgrounds and don't just go insulting other peoples stuff.

[Blinky Techno Fun o.o]

Uh, no.

Zero point, little skill required. Gave you a point for having the decency to add an epilepsy warning.

KaosKilla9231 responds:

Um...Thanks I Guess