Dawnslayer's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Save ur Planet]

It was okay

I was entertained, which is always important. I'd recommend working on graphics a bit; gradients don't get you everywhere. Level 5 needs to be fixed; I shot everything that came in, then it was a very long nothing happening. A good start, though; keep working on it.

Lucy88 responds:

This glitch has been corrected

[Monoball]

Nice premise

But the Scripting needs serious work. I clicked "instructions" and got level 0, made it through level 1 and started over; and for that matter, it wasn't clear I was supposed to click and drag the ball. I'd suggest actually making the ball into a cursor object to improve the game. But it does have potential; it just needs finessing.

Aaron0710 responds:

Right, I've fixed it up now... and checked it from the site. The instructions work, as does the shiny new plot button.

[Spec. OPS sniper]

Too basic

Fair enough for a shooter, but there was really no skill involved. You weren't fighting a timer, nor moving targets, nor anyone trying to shoot you before you shot them. And buying ammo (and upgrades?) should really be saved for the end of a level, not while you're shooting. Graphics improvement would be a nice bonus. Work on it some more, and perhaps ask a few friends to test it for you and get their input before submitting it here.

iamrunegecko responds:

i will be adding moving targets, then re-submitting...

[Bubble Adventure]

Enjoyed it a lot

Good twist on the platformer. Sadly I can't find my way past level 2 (where's the star?), but it was definitely an interesting concept. 8/10.

51lver responds:

level two star is on the far far top right hand corner of the game

[Flash Password Tutorial]

Oh, carpal tunnel!

I'm working with ActionScript 1, and can't afford to update my software, so this thing's not much use to me. But for those with AS2 programs, I can see this being helpful. (Hint to other viewers: you can copy and paste the code he gave you!) Good tutorial; 6/10.

PolutedFuse responds:

Sorry, I have to edit that..
I'm pretty sure AS2 and AS1 are prettymuch the same except for a few minor differences.. this tutorial should work with AS1 :)

[flash actionscript (easy)]

Okay then...

I thought it was funny that the button you made for the Button tutorial only worked if the mouse was right over the text--no hit area or anything.

If you're going to claim to be a reliable Flash teacher, make reliable Flash.

karionfabe responds:

i fix the button and made background colour. also added a preloader

[Newgrounds Helpful Guide]

Very useful; thank you

I'm not perfect, but I am coming to realize I could be better on NG than I am. I've posted a few reviews which are justifiably labeled useless, and it helps to know what constitutes a helpful review.

This is a very practical tool for us users, and I think it should be made available outside of the front page list. Very well done.

Sispri responds:

Ah, thank you for your kind words.