Dawnslayer's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[These Bloody Marys Will Change Your Life]

Just logged in for the first time in who knows how long, just to say that I totally relate with Tom's situation. (Also, I loved "Pancakes" and this was a great follow-up. Good job!)

sexysexybicycle responds:

For sure, feel like this is something everybody feels at some point to some degree! Glad you logged in and caught it, thanks so much dude!

[Nova Blizzard Art contest 2005]

Good, but you ouverlooked a few things...

Subject: Pose is awkward - she's standing almost too straight. The rifle doesn't seem to shift her weight at all; how would one hold a weapon that size and weight, at that angle, with only one hand and not bend the wrist? The right arm seems to be forcing in a straight position behind the leg; a slight angle in the elbow would fix that. Legs appear to be locked straight as well, "twinning" the pose; again, how she holds that rifle up with her legs creating that center of balance is beyond me. Wonderfully detailed, but defies the laws of physics.

Background: Seems to have been rushed, but it does relay the dark atmosphere of the environment, which can be difficult to do. The ambient lighting is mostly correct,save for a couple reflections off the rifle where there shouldn't be any. The creature silhouetted against the flames is a nice touch, as is the dead one behind her.

Summary: This is four years old, and you've probably improved since then. But in spite of your attention to detail, there are definite points where this could have been done better. 6/10 and 3/5 from me.

knockwurst responds:

I appreciate the honesty, and yes I can agree with everything you said : ) Thank you