Score: 3

"Better...still not impressed"

submission: Shrooms Solitaire

date: August 27, 2008

It was incredibly easy to mis-click in this game, wasting oh-so-precious seconds. Furthermore, the gameplay was repetitive, and I didn't feel any sense of accomplishment at the end. Thus, I am still left waiting for YouGame to take their projects up a notch.

Score: 0

"Here's why:"

submission: Lightning Line

date: August 27, 2008

Flashy things don't give me problems, and I was about to go blind. Please, for the sake of not harming people unintentionally, don't post this stuff.

Score: 0

"Here's the scoop:"

submission: The Squid Zone

date: August 27, 2008

There was no plot, it wasn't random enough to justify no plot, and it moved way too fast to make any sense of what there was. Try improving in those areas before you submit something.

And pandhandling for fives impresses no one.

Score: 10

"Amazing workmanship"

submission: GE.NE.SIS.: Game Intro

date: August 26, 2008

Not only did you make this game look really entertaining, but the effort you put into the art is staggering. Anyone who uses Flash knows that scale of detail is very time-consuming. An excellent preview, and I look forward to seeing the final product!

Score: 10

"Very useful; thank you"

submission: Newgrounds Helpful Guide

date: August 25, 2008

I'm not perfect, but I am coming to realize I could be better on NG than I am. I've posted a few reviews which are justifiably labeled useless, and it helps to know what constitutes a helpful review.

This is a very practical tool for us users, and I think it should be made available outside of the front page list. Very well done.

Score: 10

"Serious is good"

submission: There She Is!! step4

date: August 25, 2008

This step of "There she is" was very different, yes. But what is a good story without drama?

And besides, you're trying to send a message. I've been wondering since step 2 if cats and rabbits were a metaphor for a real-world issue, so I finally looked it up. (Thank you, Wikipedia.) It's a serious problem, and sooner or later you have to address it seriously - even if the message behind it is light-hearted.

Beautifully done as always. I'm sad to see this end with step 5, but at the same time I can't wait to see how it all turns out.

Score: 6

"A job well done; let your brother know"

submission: CR1v.CR2

date: August 25, 2008

Good premise, kept my attention. A little improvement on art and some vocal talent thrown into the mix would take this to a higher level. Tell Manual to keep working at it.

Score: 10

"Simple, elegant, funny as heck"

submission: Bruce in "Balance"

date: August 25, 2008

Classic slapstick humor, with a very simple style. Loved it; I'd like to see more of Bruce - perhaps with sounds and music next time.

Score: 10

"Loved it"

submission: Come Back Collab 2

date: August 25, 2008

Very well done to everyone who was a part of this. You did a fantastic job.

How do people usually get involved with this stuff, anyway?

Score: 5

"Good, but needs further testing"

submission: Lupezz

date: August 25, 2008

Enjoyed the premise, but the levels stopped working right around when all three options were made available. Work on that a little.